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11.03.2013 02:19 |
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Сообщение от phys2010
(Сообщение 319501)
The results gathered here on simple Lie algebras have been selected with attention to the needs of unified model builders who study theories based on simple, local-symmetry groups that contain as a subgroup the symmetry of the standard theory of electromagnetic, weak, and strong interactions.
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Что пишет эта чудо-программа
“Unified model” may require an article in front of it; consider adding an indefinite or definite article (“a” or “the”).
"have been selected"
Цитата:
Ensure you have not overused the passive voice in your work. This sentence is written in the passive voice; consider changing it to the active voice. The passive voice refers to the subject receiving the action; the active voice refers to the subject doing the action. While the passive voice is perfectly acceptable in formal writing, it may not effectively persuade the reader. In modern society, people are often convinced by facts; the active voice sounds more like a fact, or a certainty
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"simple"
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The word simple is generic and can be overused. Consider using one of the following suggested replacements instead. Review the definitions of suggested words and select the replacement that fits the context.
Suggested replacements:simplenatural ****pure ****clear ****basic ****classic ****
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